Ulice Ankh-Morpork

macell · Gość

Witam,

Nie wiedzialem gdzie zalozyc temat, wiec zalozylem na chybil-trafil ;p
Rozchodzi sie o piosenke "when you met her" z Discworld Noir.
Otóz na Waszej stronie zamiesciliscie jej tekst, ale sporo jest w nim bledów. Wg herr boa wyglada to tak:

You can't be called
If there' a whisky not your friend
or if everything was a blood
When you met her
All dead you remember
are a tunes of a wampire
A malecolic tomb
apart attending doom
I'll fetch your tankerd
feel it to the brim
A cask of stale
Broken drum ale
Wandering how long till you meet me again
at the bank Of the Ankh
Too much to drink
You can barely even think
Too much bare honger
When you met her, ya.

Poniewaz nie uwazam sie za wybitnego lingwiste, zapraszam wszystkich zainteresowanych do przesluchania i wnoszenia poprawek. takie cwiczenie z angielszkiego
http://www.lublin.mm.pl/~macel/wymh.mp3

moja wersja

You can't recall
If the whisky not your flair
Or if everything was a blur
When you met her
All that you remember
Are the tunes of a vampire
A malecolic tune
About impending doom
I'll fetch your tankard
fill it to the brim
A cask of stale
Broken drum ale
Wandering how long till you meet again
On the bank Of the Ankh
Too much to drink
You could barely even think
Too much bare harder
When you met her, ya.

macell · Gość

chodzilo o to http://www.pg.gda.pl/~mjasina/settler/dnsong.html :roll:

ale to juz niewazne, bo znalazlem poprawny tekst na innej stronie

http://uk.geocities.com/t...nyoumether.html

sadze, ze powinniscie to poprawic, bo bledy (w tekscie piosenki) sa dosyc zabawne

howgh

settler · Pirat Rabarbar Dołączył: 14 Lut 2004 Skąd: Gdańsk

chodzi tu o moja strone
jako, ze link do mp3 nie dziala to nie moge porownac obu wersji
a tekst w wolnej chwili ze sluchu pisal moj kumpel

Gość

http://www.earcom.net/files/WhenYouMetHer.mp3

macell · Gość

ok, ostateczna wersja

You can't recall
If the whisky not your flair (If there was skin on your flesh/If there's whiskey on your breath)
Or if everything was a blur
When you met her
All that you remember
Are the tunes of a vampire (an empire)
A melancholy (malecolic) tune
About impending doom

I'll fetch you tankard
Fill it to the brim
A cask of stale
Broken drum ale (inn)
Wandering how long till you meet again
On the bank Of the Ankh
Too much to drink
You could barely even think
Too much barehugger
When you met her, ya.

dziekuje za uwage